Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Favorite Lead

As I was swimming in the water I see the sunlight reflecting off the water. Then I feel something touching me.
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 4, 2009 at 11:17 AM

    This lead is interesting.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 4, 2009 at 11:20 AM

    I like how you say the sun is reflecting of the water

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  3. AnonymousNovember 4, 2009 at 11:22 AM

    I like the way you wrote it.I feel like I'm the one in the lead.It is a great lead just like a poem.

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  4. AnonymousNovember 4, 2009 at 11:25 AM

    It's very good and makes me want to read more.

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